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Review:The Christmas Fairy says:
Hello, Naida,

I thought that chapter 5 was great - a real step up! You wanted to get feedback on your cliffhanger, and I think you did a great job here. It made me really curious to know what will happen next.

I do worry a bit that Tom has managed to get into the chamber so early in your story, if it is novel length, but I look forward to finding out where you are going to take it next.

I spotted one mistake - The sentence 'Amaya pushed started up the stairs for the boys’ dorms.' has an extra word in it.

Author's Response: Thanks! The sad thing is that I had to skim through chapter 5 again *headdesk* I'm getting so out of touch with this story. But thank you for the lovely review. I decided that Tom getting into the Chamber early was necessary to move the plot along, because I really did want to set it up as a parallel to CoS. Thank you for your thoughts on this!

-Naida


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