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Review:accioHPFF says:
My last review was counted as 2011, so I thought I'd have to come and leave another one. What a shame! :P

This is really great, but I'll start with the one problem with this chapter because I never seem to have anything to say. There were a few times when you made a mistake with your grammar. I noticed it mainly when you used speech, because you often used a full stop instead of a comma. Apart from the odd mistake, this was really good.

*enters normal review mode*

I don't know what to say! I can't wait to find out what McGonagall needs to tell them.

I like how subtly you're introducing the Draco/Hermione. At the minute, it's just Hermione feeling sorry for Draco. I'm glad that you haven't rushed into it, because I'm not a huge Draco/Hermione fan and here, you're developing it gradually. :)

We didn't see a lot about the Carrows in this chapter, but I can't wait to see how you build their characters.

Lastly, the sorting hat song was brilliant, and it was a really great addition to the chapter.

-accioHPFF! :)

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