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Review:PhsycoPenguan64 says:
OMG THAT WAS SOOO GOOD! i just read your story today and it is amazing! i love the sexual tension! i cant wait for Myra And James to hook it up! But i can already see well my version in my head! they like get in an epic fight and then BAM start makeing out in the locker rooms! Cuz they always fight over quiditch i can totally see that happening!ANd like Dom barges in and goes like "YOU LIARS I THOUGHT YOU WERENT BOYFRIEND AND GIRLFRIEND!YOU LIED TO ME!" and yea! i feel bad for ash though! having to marry someone! umm your question. Scorp seems a little flat and albus too. We only hear about them when the maurders are skeeming. Also some of Myras friends like Amy. we really havent heard allot from her. that doesnt mean i want you to stray from Myra and James you could just put little side storys from there point of view once and a why'ell. Like their prosective of Myra and James! I love this story update soon plz! :)
P.S. the fight AMAZING! shirt reaping hilarious!and Mary i love her!

Author's Response: thank you so much! well...i dunno...i wasn't picturing DOM bursting in on them...but there definitely was a broom cupboard involved ;)
thank you for the feedback on my question. i'll definitely used that to help me write my next chapter and expand on my characters. and oh yes. sexual tension. trust me, i haven't even BEGUN to ramp that up. it will get worse. and funnier. MWAHAHAHA!
i would hate to be a character in one of my stories. until next time, lovely reviewer!


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