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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

AHHH! This chapter gave me goosebumps! Especially the end of it! It was just…it was beyond sweet!

I had a feeling from the beginning that Ariana was Albus’ sister, but I just couldn’t fully convince myself of it. Now I know for sure, and am not really surprised. But I do like the emotion and feelings with them. And how that leads to Aurelia figuring out who it is she should have been forgiving…such a true sentiment. Beautiful.

And I found two things in this one that could be fixed:

“I did at Hogwarts,” she said thoughtfully.” ~I’m thinking you meant It, no I.

“The eerie mist swirled at our feast, shapes becoming denser on the horizon ahead.” ~Believe you meant feat, not feast.

And last but not least, two of my favorite lines:

“Vanity was not for the dead.”

“The reality is never as bad as the imagination paints it to be and worrying is rarely fruitful.”

Really excellent job!

~Secret Santa

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