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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

This chapter was…definitely weird, but still very good. It’s very odd for the white world to seem so sad, to seem like it was struggling. In previous chapters it has seemed to be emotionless, and just there. But now it’s actually feeling something…it’s strange. And fascinating at the same time. It so easily draws me in. I want to know how it works, just as much as Aurelia wants to.

Her curiosity about the trees leaking that green color to her, to the ground around her feet, makes me just as curious. I wonder like her what caused it and why it happened. It’s so easy to follow her curiosity and absorb it yourself. It’s great.

And the souls? Really creepy that they were out of Skeleton Woods. Even James was surprised, which makes it even creepier. Why would the souls have a reason to leave Skeleton Woods? Does it relate to what’s going on in the real world, the fight with Voldemort?

Also, two things I noticed:

“A jumbled mass of despair and distress. And they were reaching our their wasted hands for me.” ~Instead of our, you meant out.

“It was hopeless, it was pointed.” ~I’m thinking you meant pointless?

And last but not least, my favorite line:

“After a while, it became a part of you as much as you were a part of it.”

I don’t know why I love this line…but I most definitely do! It just really seemed to fit! And now I’m off to the next chapter! :D

~Secret Santa

--By the way, reviews from the 27 were for week 2 (My internet decided to crash for a couple days preventing me from reading or reviewing.) So this would be the start of week 3 :D

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