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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello.

This story has such a…melancholy-ish feel to it. Ariana seems so distraught over being stuck in this world; of being sucked back into the real one, even though her acceptance of being dead. It’s so sad, yet it’s near impossible to stop reading. It gives such an in depth view of a girl who always seemed to be pushed away, hidden from sight and thought.

And it not only makes Ariana a more real character, it defines Aberforth too. It gives you a feel for his character that can’t quite be described with words. Part of it is guilt, for that I’m almost sure, but there’s more to it. I just don’t know the words to describe it with.

Now the thing I’m waiting for is more with Albus. His connection with her, his guilt, his way of being that seems so detached from her, from who he was when she was still alive; it’s something I really want the opportunity to explore. It really has my curiosity and I definitely cannot wait for more chapters of this! Its characterization and description are excellent and just…awe inspiring! Made even better by Ariana’s need for solitude. Having little to no interaction with others of this very strange world really put a new twist on the white world with how it is.

~Santa of the secretive sort

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