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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

I know I say this within almost every review I leave, but it holds true for so much of your writing. Itís amazing. Truly and fully amazing.

I loved how this started out with tons of great imagery and raw emotion. Itís strange, how easy it is to feel for Ariana and how sheís stuck in this in between world. Yet I adore every word of it, because for everything that Ariana learns in this strange world, I take something away from the words that causes me to think. Itís really neat.

Another thing I adore out of this chapter is Strawberry Hill. I love how vividly you word things so readers understand what the island of strawberries means to Ariana. How itís her rotting heart, and how the water around this island is able to magnetically draw her to the images, even if she doesnít want to see them. It really defines the white world and how it works.

Though it does make me wonder why Ariana wants so badly to get away from it. It makes me wonder more about her past [I donít recall much of itÖmust re-read DHÖ], and how she did think and feel about her brothers. I can honestly say I have not read a single story [Before Sitting in the Orange Tree of course] that even said Arianaís name in passing, which I think just further intrigues me about her character. [The way you have her developed though is past the point of amazing! You really have a clear knowledge of her character in your head :) ]

Amazing job, once again!

~Santa the secret

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