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Review:Secret Santa :) says:
Ah, another great chapter! This is starting to turn out to be quite an original Dramione fic - I think the main thing that makes this much more realistic and believable is the AU part of it - how you said Voldemort was defeated by the infant Harry. It makes Dramione so much more realistic in your story than when people try to keep the whole story canon, but bring Dramione into it - so then it doesn't seem plausible at all! If that makes sense.

Anyway, I just wanted to applaud you on how realistic your Dramione seems to be so far! I liked that interaction between Draco and Hermione, the witty comments and the eclairs. And I really liked how you're characterising Ron and Hermione - it's quite believable for me, and I'm surprised Ron is really so insensitive as to be 'outraged' when Hermione asked him to clean up, but I suppose he could be quite the jerk if he'd been mothered for his whole life.

Very curious to see where you go with this story!

♥ secret santa

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes that does make sense xD I'm glad it's realistic!

The Daco-Hermione banter was quite hard actually! i've got some tips from other Dramione's but most of it was 'make it up as you go along!'

Well, Ron is very much the back-up guy who Hermione doesn't really love in this story, so that's why I've done him a bit harshly, I guess.

Thank youuu!

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