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Review:Secret Santa :) says:
Aw, what a great prologue! I think you've done a great job with this opening chapter - already I'm intrigued and wanting to read on, and you've given us a great load of background information in a few simple words - which is really excellent.

I like Hermione's characterisation in this - you managed to keep it pretty canon (even though this is quite an AU fic, judging by your A/N). And I really liked Rose too! How adorable that she likes Scorpius and was drawing him, hehe!

The only thing I'd point out is this part: "her qualifications had mysteriously vanished" - I'm pretty sure that was just to make her marriage to Ron make sense right?, but it would be nice to elaborate on that to make the situation even more believable and realistic.

But really, a great opening chapter.

♥ secret santa

Author's Response: Hey Secret Santa!
The prologue is probably the only chapter on here I'm happy about xD. This fic has kind of taken the sidelines, but I have another chapter written that I'll update with soon.

I'm surprised you said my characterisation was good-I don't really think it is! But as its AU I guess it doesn't matter :) Thanks!

Ok, thanks for the advice. I think I will break that first paragraph down quite a lot, actually!

LWG :)

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