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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello.

I really can feel for Molly. Though not exactly the same situation, I know what it’s like to stand by and not get the guy; to have the guy not notice that you’re standing just feet away while he is with some other girl. And you get that feeling from Molly across so easily. It’s really good to have it seem so realistic. I did find two small thing:

“She wants to say farewell to man who haunts her dreams, her waking thoughts and who ghosts in and out of her future.” Add in the after to and before man.

“Her head tells her to turn around and stop following a dream that cannot come true, her heart will follow him until the end.” I think you want the word ‘but’ before her heart.

That second quote is ALSO my favorite line of this chapter. I can relate to it simply, as it’s pretty much exactly what runs through my mind…and yeah. It’s great!

~Santa the Secret

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