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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

I really love the simplicity of this chapter. Theyíre at the beach and Molly just takes that moment to stand on her own. No planning of Teddy coming to stand beside her, yet he does. Itís just really sweet. And the imagery! Itís so beautifully written! This line in particular:

ďHer love was only a childís love, only shallow like the water she stands in. But this water she is willing to go deeper in, if only he will let her.Ē

Itís just so fitting. And I love her counting! Iím not quite sure what it is about the part with her counting that I like, but itís just sweet [if not mildly creepy ;) ]. I like how she knows how old he is, down to the months. And how old she is. Itís cute. And it seems, with Teddy asking how old she is at the end, as if Teddy is waiting for her to finally be old enough. As if he wants to go out with her, even though heís dating her cousin.

~Secret Santa

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