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Review:ashling586 says:
Before I begin, let me just say that I think your chapter image is beautiful. Now that is off my chest, I must say that I thought this chapter was very well written. This is the first time I have ever read a Minerva/Tom story and I have to admit that so far I am intrigued as to where this might be going.
As I pointed out on my review forum I am not the best person to ask when it comes to grammar, but I didn't notice any major issues.
I liked the way that Minerva's younger version reminds me of Hermione, but then again I have always felt that Hermione made a great younger version of Minerva anyway. At this point in time I haven't made an opinion on what I think of Tom's character, probably due to the fact we are only getting a small glimpse of him at this point. It will be interesting to see how his character will develop as more chapters are added to this story.
There was only one part of the this chapter that threw me off a bit. Minerva sneaks out at eleven...it takes her till just about sunrise to get to her destination...but she stills manages to get back to the host house by 5am. The timing just doesn't seem right to me. It could just be that I am being too picky, but I figured I would point it out anyway just in case.
Overall, I really liked the story and I really want to know what is going to happen next. I really want to know what she found when she got back and who might be dead.

Author's Response: Wow that was quick :)
Thank you and Tom/Minerva is a beautiful ship - it's a more realistic version of Draco/Hermione haha.
I've always imagined Minerva as a earlier Hermione because they resemble one another so much in the books

Thanks for pointing that out, thanks i'll fix that as soon as the que opens again :)
Thanks for the amazing review :D

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