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Review:October Sea Breeze says:
Okay, after trouble logging in... here I am! Woho! With a random review...

This is my first time reading any of Percy's daughters... hell, it's not even my tenth time reading Nex Gen I think. So I can't really compare Lucy & Molly - though I think they're quite underloved - to Lucys & Mollys of other authors. How many people do write Nex Gen these days but forget them? I don't know... don't ask me.

The story! I'm getting used to >3000 words one shots! I think that's good... :3 This was perfect lengeth... that is not a word, who cares? I don't. No one should care! At all. I'm sidetracking... again. Bad me!

So! The story! Wanna bet after 100 more words I'm still not talking about the story? See! Again! Ahum. The story... As I said, I'm not so keen (I never said that..) on Next Generation. I don't have the connection with it as most people have with it, so I'm always hesistant about it. But! You talked me into it and the banner was lovely so I read it.

It was a nice read. Stream of conciousness is always fun to read since it makes one connect to a character. I love connecting to a character. It makes me feel so.. INVOLVED. If you know imagine me saying this with wide arm movements, you're right. ^^ I want to hug Lucy - if I got the character wrong this is such a fail - and tell her dad that he should shut up since he's not perfect either! (Okay I think Percy is perfect... odd). ((Don't tell him I said this)).

The break off of the SoC was a bit weird though. You suddenly brought Molly in and whilst this is probably a very big thing in the whole story it seemed so weird. So... SUDDEN. I have this rather dislike for people who snap other people out of their thoughts because the writer needs to go back to dialogue - I'm guilty of this myself... but ej! Hehe...

What else to say? I don't know. I liked it. It was a nice Next Gen - this sounds like a lousy review. I'm tired, forgive me. You shouldn't take this as if I mean that this was the average Next Gen cause it totally wasn't, darling! No worries! Still love me?? Still think I'm awesome?? Good! Yay! Ahum. I'm distracted by food waiting for me!

This is worth a looovely 8.8/10 (I have something with .8...). :D

xOSB who thinks this is a stupid review.

Author's Response: How in the world am I supposed to respond to this...

Well, this is the first time I've ever written Percy's daughters, which was weird in itself because a couple months ago I never would have considered it. And I was kind of iffy about Next-Gen too, and I've only read some here and there. Probably more than you have though. Not to mention I've had an ongoing next-gen story for a about two years now. A lot of people are writing next-gen though, it's become like half of HPFF, just so you know.

I'm glad you like the length. There was too much Lucy had to say for there to be any less words. And I didn't want it to be super long since it's mostly just stream of consciousness. And I'm glad you liked the SoC, because I really like writing it. Although I'm sorry the switch to the conversation was weird for you. I didn't really think of that when I wrote it, but I didn't want it to be JUST her inner monologuing with herself angrily. I wanted there to be some sort of solace at the end for her. And she's very envious of Molly so I figured that putting in that scene would be nice.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story and that you decided to branch out and read another iffy next-gen, haha. And don't worry, I still love you and think you are awesome.

Thank you so much for the super long and random review!

xxEnigmaticEyes16

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