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Review:Pixileanin says:
The quiet acceptance these two have of each other is really well done. Too tired to argue and too desperate for normalcy... if either of them ever had that to begin with. I like how you allowed Sirius to be distracted by Lucy's condition, just briefly enough to let us know that he is aware of it, but not so much that he can't see who she used to be. I love that you highlight Lucy's need to escape her reality and Sirius' desire to relive what might have been the better part of his past.

Author's Response: Yes, the emotion got through. So far I'm not considering this story a failure, hah :) You've described it perfectly -- they're just tired. They're too old to bicker the way they did as teenagers, so they neither finish fighting nor really make up. They just kind of exist together.

Thanks!

Amanda


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