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Review:accioHPFF says:
Yippee! *does happy dance*

I have another fic to read!

I love this. You started it so well talking about beginnings, and then the scene at home. It was brilliant. We kind of knew who the character was before you told us, which was brilliant aswell. :)

You seem to switch between canon and non-canon, which I find interesting. You've got the Muggleborn Registration Commission set up, and I don't know what's going to happen. I'll have to read more. :P Obviously you intend to go back into canon with this, so we'll see what happens :)

There are loads of questions I have, but I guess I'll have to read on to find out the answers!


Author's Response: Hi!
I can't believe you went and found this after my rambling in the SFCP! :P Either way, choosing Hermione was a big decision, I knew I wanted to split the trio up for this, and it was almost Ron that I left behind, but I figured he would be angry and upset about it forever, and Hermione wouldn't hold a grudge so she was the person to take on the new beginning, but it was so close to being Ron!

I really wanted to create something set in canon but with it's own little twists, it'll switch in and out quite a bit, particularly towards the end where canon really takes on a major role in the story itself! The MBC is one of those little subplots but it makes many returns due to how much trouble it'll cause!

Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and read and review based off my crazy ramblings!
~ Ash

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