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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
I really like the way you've written Lily's train of thought as the complete opposite of Rose's. It makes me think she may be modeled as one of Elizabeth's younger sisters, though I can't pinpoint who she reminds me of because it's really been too long since I read Pride and Prejudice, and reading this makes me want to read it again.

Also, Albus's persona is very recognizable as the gentleman who marries Elizabeth's older sister in Pride and Prejudice. The paisley gave him away ;) Overall, excellent story you've crafted thus far and I can't wait to read more. I can't believe it took me this long to get around to reading it and already I devoured the three chapters that are posted. Keep up the rich detailing and sarcastic bantering, loving it all. :) 10/10

Author's Response: Lily is definitely the opposite of Rose, though I'm not really certain which Bennett sister Lily is most like - she's a combination of Jane and Kitty, I think. Oddly enough, Rose is more like Lydia than Lily is in this story - Rose is the outspoken one who gets into trouble, whereas Lily just wants to live up to the position she's been born into; she doesn't even have to worry about marrying if she can't find the right husband.

Oh my gosh, I never noticed that Albus is a Bingley! They're both alike in their fashion sense, to say the least. XD I didn't mean that to happen, but the Austen influence is pretty powerful, I guess.

I'm really glad that you've liked the story so far - thank you very much for reading and reviewing these chapters! It was wonderful to hear from you on this story. ^_^

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