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Review:theelderwand says:
Why on earth doesn't this chapter have any reviews?

Ok. The baby carrier thing was brilliant. Hermione to the rescue!! But, I think you've got the weariness inherent in calming an unhappy infant down perfectly here. Bone-weariness is a better word. I could feel Ginny's back-ache. However, I especially thought this captured things best:

"He looked down at his godson and couldn't blame him for being upset. Both his parents had died, and now his grandmother was hurt and he was staying in a new house. He leaned his head down and kissed the top of the baby's head, which was neon blue at the moment."

And Harry's line about letting Ginny see him starkers to even things up? Priceless!

Eldy

Author's Response: I have that baby carrier, and it's my life saver!

I'm glad you're enjoying it :)


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