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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Hello AC!
I am finally making the effort to review all the lovely stories of people in my favourites, and that I know on the forums :)

OK, before we go anywhere: 'as if their enthusiasm for life had exploded from the pen.' That is the most amazing description of a signature that I have ever seen! Actually, I've never read any particular descriptions of a signature. None that stood out like this one at any rate. It's perfect; Ginny would be torturously going over every detail of Fred, George, the twins. She wouldn't want to forget a thing.

Oh, and I love how it's kind of from Ginny's POV. That's different. You've done her pretty well, so you may now be released from your fear of canon!

I don't quite understand the first paragraph-why did they receive no note from Harry, Ron or Hermione? Where were they? Oh, hang on I think I've figured it out-is the first paragraph the Christmas during the war? When H&H&R are Horcruxing?

the way the paragraphs kind of jump around is very effective. adding to the confusion and joy and sadness everyone's feeling at the same time. You said in your MTA that your strongest point was the emotion in your stories-this is very true. You're great at getting even the trickiest of emotion across.

A lovey read!
LWG x

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry - I'm still scared of canon. I seem to be writing things that are really going to push myself at the moment, and this was a great big scary thing for me so I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

I liked the line about the pen, that was fun to write, and I thought it especially fit the twins. No, you're right - I haven't seen that many discription sof a signature either :P

Yeah, Harry, Ron and Hermione were off horcrux hunting :)

Thank you very very much for another lovely review! They mean a lot too me :)

-AC


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