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Review:academica says:
Hi Jane! Thanks for swapping with me :) It's always a pleasure to read your work, you talented person you!

This was adorable. There's hardly a better word for it. You kept things in line with canon, of course, which I fully expected you to do, and do well. I really liked the dynamic between the three Marauders who remained at Hogwarts. They've got a good, boyish relationship with one another, not too nice but not too harsh, either. You've got an excellent level of teasing while still making it plain that they're close enough to endure a bit of ribbing from one another, and I like that Peter doesn't have to endure it by himself in this one. Poor Peter always gets the raw end of the deal, but I like that Remus was the one responsible for the sludgy eggnog (Eww.).

I enjoyed the sock bit as well, and I'm happy that Remus kept them. I would find it hard to picture Remus actually getting up the nerve to return a Christmas gift to someone, wouldn't you?

Clearly I should work harder to convince you to write something on my behalf. Between this and the piece you wrote for Sarah, I'm persuaded that you write nothing less than Marauder gold. Excellent, dear! :)

Amanda

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, Amanda! ♥ I don't even know where to begin in responding to this, except to say THANK YOU so much!

I love writing the Marauders, because I feel like a lot of people try to make their Hogwarts selves a lot more than they were, if that makes sense. First and foremost they were just a really close group of friends, and that's very underestimated in fic. And in my experience with teenage boys, there is no shortage of teasing. :P

The offer still stands -- any time you want a one-shot, just let me know! I value your opinion, and your friendship, and would be honored to write it for you. :3 Thank you so much, Amanda, this review means a lot to me!


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