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Review:Pixileanin says:
These characters seem so eager to bond, but there's this distance between them too. I like the contrast that you've created there. You move Sirius through the action smoothly, from the nicking of the coat to the entrance to the vault. With a bit of practiced coercion and a bit of luck, he go through it all. I suppose it would have been too lucky of him to get his hands on that wand of his. And now I have to know what he wants with that hardware store...

Author's Response: Yeah, I do think there's a bit of a contrast between them, one that will change, becoming wider and more narrow as the story unfolds. I think that's a good way of describing the volatility of the emotions I've tried to write in this piece, so I'm glad it worked for you.

Hope you enjoy the next few chapters! :)

academica


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