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Review:Pixileanin says:
Interesting, that Rachael had the ingredients in her flat for that meal. I suppose that, like you said, she occasionally attempted to make herself feel normal once in a while. Very convenient for her unexpected guest, so that she could put up a convincing front for him. It tied in nicely to her thoughts in the bathroom, when she tried to convince herself that things were okay inside her.

I liked how you were able to show that she was a witch without too much fuss, that she used magic only when she needed to. That was a nice touch. Also, the way that these characters quietly accepted each other, that they both recognized the sad situation in the other, that was well done too.

Author's Response: I try to be subtle when I can :) This story is really about emotion more than action, the process of two characters simultaneously resisting and giving in to one another in one slow, tortured spiral. We know Sirius had a bit of a dark past, and Rachael isn't so different in that respect, so the collateral damage from those experiences is the focus of this tale.

Thanks for another kind review! :)

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