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Review:Pixileanin says:
I liked the contrast between Sirius almost wolfing down the sandwich out of extreme hunger and Rachael with her little tip of a French fry, and how she was almost using him to cover for her inability to eat any noticeable portion of her lunch. It made me wonder what made her want to spend time with Sirius again after what might seems to have been a really long time, and why, if he hadn’t recognized her yet, she would risk having someone she knew get closer to her and figure out who she was. So many questions. And only one way to find out...

Author's Response: Yes, many questions! It seems like the mystery part is working for you, which is great. You'll (hopefully) come to see that the similarities between Sirius and the waitress are just as striking as, or perhaps more striking than, the differences.

Thanks for another kind review! :)

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