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Review:adoranymph says:
wow, where do i even begin with this one? it works on so many levels. i guess in the first place i'd like to say that i really liked seeing a kind of relationship between remus and mad-eye, only because we don't really get to know mad-eye as a person much in the books, at least not in a sympathetic way (with tonks it was different because we saw her grow vulnerable with her love for remus etc. after our initial impression of her bubbly curiosity and clumsiness, whereas mad-eye was kind of the same throughout and didn't go through any sort of developmental changes as a character) so it was cool to see another facet of him, that he could be lonely as well as a paranoid.

i also liked the kind of dream that remus has that creates the catalyst for him to go and check on harry, the way he was kind of in the middle, looking at the wall that divided poor harry and the unseen james.

very entertaining read, and i hope that in the next chapter, when remus sees how miserable harry is, there might be some sort of hope that he manages to instill in the boy, as well as the boy instilling hope in him? even if he isn't allowed to be seen and has to go under the invisibility cloak.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

I am so glad you liked the friendship between Moody and Lupin. I hadn't originally planned for that to be in the story, but as a wrote, it just came to me and I knew it would fit well so I included it! I am so glad I did, because I really liked that part of the story myself!

I am also glad you liked the dream. I was trying to figure out a reason for Lupin to visit Harry, I mean he could not just go out of the blue... I came up with the dream, it provided the reason for Lupin's visit.

Anyway, thanks again for the review, I am so glad you liked it! :)

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