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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

Every time I read the next chapter of this story, I'm amazed by what the white world can do. You'd figure I'd understand anything is possible there, like Aurelia figured out, but I just...I can't seem to understand that. But it's one of the things that makes this story even more addicting: the need to figure out what else can happen in this mysterious world.

Your characterization, description and grammar is great, though I found one small thing with a sentence:

"A small wave of longing crept up on me as I watched her, and I wished more than anything I could be sharing the joy and happiness with." ~I think you want a 'her' after with.

Otherwise, again, great job! Looking forward to going on and reading the next chapter :D

~Secret Santa

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