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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
This was so sad! :( :( :(

I liked this line right here:
They didn't seem to float across the air as much as push through it.

I thought that was a very fitting description, and I could easily picture the butterflies still making their way toward him, letting him know he was being thought of, that they were still family. It's very sad that he lost Arabella and then sort of lost his daughter, too, and that for all of her strength she was still so stricken with grief. I can't even imagine being seven years old and watching my mother fade away in a hospital bed. Her father had to have been gutted when she showed him the birthday card. :(

Author's Response: That's one of my favorite lines too. This chapter gave me a bit of a challenge but I really enjoyed writing it. Thank you for the feedback!

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