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Review:MidnightBlue_x says:
Hello There, This is ElysiumJayne again from over at the forums- I'm sorry it took me so long to get around to your review but I'm here now and super excited for the second chapter! I've been so busy lately otherwise I would have left you a review in my own time, anyway- moving on.

I know you said you were worried about the characterisation of Harry but I think you did an excellent job, I find the fact he would be nervous around Andromeda to be quite a possibility in the canon universe. And while on that note, I adore how you write Andromeda! And I love how Teddy's toy is named Padfoot, so sweet! And your characterisation of Teddy is so cute, it is cute how you added that he and Victoire sort of already had a thing for each other!

The idea of the photographs, with Bella missing, is a sad part but also very sweet I think. Your writing makes me feel like I am Andromeda and Bella is my sister, I feel upset and want to find out why Bella is missing. I think this proves that your writing is spectacular, and to be honest- you have quickly become my upmost favourite author on HPFF. I hope to see a lot of good things from you in the future!

I know you also mentioned you weren't sure about the end but I found it very interesting, I can almost hear the thoughts running through Andromeda's head and I feel afraid for her.

I hope this review helped and as I mentioned, I hope to see a lot from you in the future. Please feel free to re-request anytime.

x Ely

Author's Response: I'm glad you think Harry's okay - I find him impossibly difficult to write for some reason O.o I don't think he likes me, lol. Teddy is adorable - I wasn't sure whether or not to call the toy Padfoot or Moony, but I thought that it's more likely for him to have a dog-like toy than a wolf, so Padfoot it was! Ah yeah, I'm a Teddy/Victoire shipper! *nods*
The photograph was a really random idea... but now it's a kinda important one, oddly enough... hm... weird. As for new stuff (and I'm incredibly flattered!) I do have a couple of new things in the pipeline, waiting for when things already up are finished.
It was so difficult! I wasn't sure it if even worked with the rest of the chapter, you know.

Thank you for the lovely review!
Aph xx

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