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Review:MidnightBlue_x says:
Hello again, hopefully you remember who I am from my last review and therefore there is no need for introductions :P

I really love the idea of Ron's clock, while it's not overly important to the story (weirder things have happened), I enjoyed it and the 'Ginger's up' comment made me giggle. I liked how you gave Ron a muggle job, I think it definitely could have happened somewhere in his life though I can imagine Arthur demanding that he bring things back. Again, the italics still throw me off a little but I am slowly adapting to them- I still firmly believe you should discuss them with a beta though!

I love the Muggle character- Tony, that you added in- though I'm guessing he is mainly there to fill the spaces, I'm not sure why but I find him interesting and perhaps comical relief later on. The story between Laura and Ron interests me and I love the fact Laura is Mr Gregor's daughter, I didn't see that one coming. I feel an instant dislike to the Gregor family, though I keep imaging that Laura is really this different girl inside- maybe that's just me seeing the good in people.

I will see you in the next chapter (which will be my last review)!

x Ely

Author's Response: Yes.. I think I can remember you ;)

Thank you :) I just always imagined that Molly wuld of made the children an individual clock each :D

The italics will definetly be going in January! I completely forgot all about them til your reviews!

I'll definetly be carrying this on soon though - but I think a bit of a rewrite is needed!

Thanks for the review :)


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