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Review:Secret Santa :) says:
A great fifth chapter! I really enjoyed this! :) Again, it was filled with the perfect amount of events and interactions. I loved the beginning straightaway: "People think that because I canít cry, Iím heartless." I can sort of relate, since I'm not very emotional!

Haha, these were really funny, "what kind of a name is quaffle? Like a flying waffle with a q- stuck on the front. Qwaffle. And you canít even eat this type." Never heard that before, but the idea of a flying waffle is stuck in my head now! I loved how Marlene thought his name was "Zenophilpots"!

And I really liked this too - "Well unicorns came from the white tips of waves. They rose out of the sea aeons ago, and are made of pure sea magic" Is that actually true? It sounds like something Xeno would definitely say!

The interaction between Marlene and Xeno was really interesting! You definitely managed to capture the weirdness of Xeno. Marlene/Xeno would be hilarious! "I donít actually like watermelons, they just look nice." Haha!

Oh, and I'm laughing over "Regulanglio" - if somebody actually was called that, I"d feel so terribly sorry for him! So basically, I loved this! There's actually a lot of humour in it, which is great, and as I said before, your writing works out really wonderful with Marlene's narration. Loved it! :)

♥ secret santa

Author's Response: Ok, I forgot that you'd actually gfind out about who the rebound is in chapter 5, not 6. Oh well!

Glad you liked the humour in there :) I'm particularly fond of the quaffle paragraph!!

The unicorn thing...the unicorn thing! It's not actually canon by the way, but it does sound exactly the kind of thing Xeno Lovegood would believe. It adds a bit of depth to the chapter, I hope! Aw Marlene/Xeno, what a pair! *hearty thingy*

Aw, thank you a million times Secret Santa. you are amazing! xxx


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