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Review:BKL8008 says:
To be brutally honest, the only reason I found this one was because it was #1 on the list when I checked for new stuff. Otherwise, I'd have never found it! Amazing how busy this site is, even with the queue closed to all but TA's. I think your characterization of the characters is fine. I think Molly might be too over-the-top at the beginning, hugging the clock, but not too much. She certainly has had to be too strong for too long, so it's entirely believable. I liked the bit with her reminding Ginny that she too had lost her brother(s). This is something that one doesn't think about too often, as Gideon and Fabian are only mentioned in passing. Knitting a "F" sweater/jumper was an excellent touch. It illustrates the lingering grief that one may not WANT to let go of at Christmas. And yes, one does tend to hang onto that grief, even for years to come. All in all, I think you did a good job with this, although I had a hard time following it from year to year, I assume? Perhaps a note, or a bold text date in each bit? Well done.

Author's Response: Hi there :)

I love it when you find a story just by accident, and I also love it when people randomly stumble across something of mine... ;) I guess everyone submitted queues right before the queue closed - giving the validators plenty to do even on their holiday.

Thank you so much for the review! I really wasn't sure about this so I really appreciate the feedback. I'll bare that in mind when I edit it! Thank you :D

-AC


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