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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello :)

I'm truely facinated with this story. I started reading it not quite sure what to expect, but I really rather like it. It's really curious how Aurelia isn't sure if she is or isn't dead...honestly, I don't know if she is or isn't.

But I think that is part of the fascination. I've never given Luna's mum much thought but you really start this story strong. You bring Aurelia into an unknown place that's purely white, other than the orange tree. And then a wand grows from the tree and somehow this orange tree wand brings up all kinds of things. It's really cleaver. I definitely can't wait to move on and read more!

A couple things, though, did get a bit iffy. Some of the past tense seemed to be inching more towards present tense at times. Usually it was just a single word that didn't quite go past tense but didn't sound bad. The other thing that sort of got distracting was commas. Some of the commas you had in the chapter weren't necessary. It wasn't bad, but it did cause me to have to reread a couple sentences becuase the commas made me pause at weird points. But other than those two things, I truely loved this! Now I'm off to read the next chapter!

~SECRET Santa

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