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Review:The Dirigible Sugarplum says:
So your summary really drew me in... how could I not read a story with unabashed elitism? I live and breathe unabashed elitism. *nods matter-of-factly*

Er... moving on.

This one-shot was... just so raw and full of emotions and real and beautiful; I love it so much! ♥ You captured the stage of adolescence wonderfully. And the way it was arranged; it was like every section was a part of the puzzle that we had to piece together, like Rose was trying to do with Scorpius. (Does that make sense? Eh, in my head it sounded so much better and way less cheesy. xD)

About Rose and Scorpius... this fic was just so different; you had me eating it up. You had my doubts at the semi-cliche'd beginning, but by the time that we found out they had the same wand you had me hook, line, and... eh, whatever, I'm not a fish. :P Your descriptions were fantastic; I could imagine every little scene in my head; and need I even say any more about your characterization? In this short time span, I even felt like I got to know your minor characters, like Albus and Sylvia, whcih is saying a lot.

*Bows down to you*

The ending... Well, of course, there's always the disappointed fangirl part of me (I ship fairytale happy endings! 8D), but I think that there wouldn't be a better way to end it. It just fits, I guess.

And, like the nitpicky person that I am, I spotted a few errors (Scorpius's drew in a deep breath, his steps slowing before coming to a stop), but nothing too drastic, so don't worry. xD

Have a clawsome holiday; and sorry for all this rambling! ^^

-The Dirigible Sugarplum/ Your secret santa :3

Author's Response: Elitism is the best! 8D It knows that for sure, mmhmm.

Hee, no I love the way you described it! I had a lot of moments I wanted to show between them, so it ended up being a lot of small moments. I don't think I knew how to do much otherwise at that point in my writing xD

It wasn't ever a romance fic with me; it was always about Rose growing up - changing and accepting her past mistakes. Perhaps they could've ended up together, but we don't actually know very much about Scorpius, before or even after he's changed.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Teehee, your reviews are so amusing :D

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