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Review:Your Ravenclaw Secret Santa says:
It's me again! Happy Christmas!
Can't say I'm much of a Dramione fan, but I thought I'd leave a review anyways!
Thought Hermione was very in character, and I liked how you showed her "slacking" in her lessons. And getting extremely upset at Snape's unfair attitude towards Gryffindors.
I can't say your Draco was in character, but you did make him likable, something that can be tricky.
I would've liked more detail on how the mutual liking started for each character, and more about the little details they're just starting to notice in each other.
Overall, a good job, the ending was the perfect culmination to the build up of feelings you'd been explaining.

Keep it up!

Secret Santa

Author's Response: You're a dear for reviewing this even though you don't like Dramione. Thank you! :D Oh, I know how OOC both Draco and Hermione is but I leave this story up as a reminder of how not to write fanfiction :P

-Sophia


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