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Review:Secret Santa says:
The plot thickens! It's really pulling me in. Caradoc is such an interesting character, and I never really thought of him like this, yet it's just so perfect! You have characterised him superbly. His interaction with yet another Death Eater/Ex-Slytherin was great; I want to know what he's up to! He doesn't seem like the sort of person the Order would put up with, but then again, they do put up with Mundungus-- who I was so pleased to see in this chapter :D The fight scene was brilliant; very well written, and seemed very realistic. I like how you had Frank having to wake Caradoc up-- some people seem to think that the Order are always on the ready, whereas they weren't, obviously! I love your Frank in this (though he was already one of my favourite characters) though I hope to see Alice soon! Again, the appearance of the Marauders was brilliant-- especially Caradoc's conversation with Sirius, which really highlighted Sirius' immaturity. You show brilliantly that they are only just out of Hogwarts, and not used or prepared for suddenly fighting in a war.

I can't wait to read more! 10/10

Clue Number 3: One of my pets has something in common with Alan Rickman

Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoy writing him... when he decides to co-operate with me, lol. I actually kinda like Mundungus - he's a really fun character, because he's so blatantly shady and tricky :D He'll turn up again, I promise!
Oh gosh, I had so much trouble writing that scene! I hadn't written a fight scene for years before that one, so it was oddly hard.
Alice and Frank will turn up again - probably quite a bit, I think. I've always thought that the Marauders would have found it difficult to really understand - especially Sirius, because he grew up with a family on the other side, so to speak. Plus, they're only eighteen - really young, all things considering.

Thanks for the wonderful review!
Aph xx

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