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Review:Secret Santa says:
Another great chapter. I'm really intrigued about what Caradoc's up to! I presume he's into something dodgy! He's almost like a more intelligent Mundungus-- he has links in the darker side. I like how you had Rookwood talking to him-- we know he's a Death Eater, but no-one else did, so it was a nod to Caradoc's Slytherin heritage without being "oh my god he's talking to Bellatrix lestrange". Your descriptions are brilliant, and I truly feel as if I am there alongside Caradoc. I'm really being drawn into this story and will favourite it as soon as I get off anonymous :D I like the contrast between Caradoc at work and Caradoc with the order. The talk about the attack was so sad-- the poor Bones'! Yet it fit into cannon so well... you are a really talented writer, and I'm so glad I've discovered your stories!

Right, clue number 2: I do like an Arthurian Bromance

Author's Response: Haha, lol, I never thought of it that way! Yeah, he is a bit like a cleverer Mundungus. I included Rookwood because from what we know of him he was a very, very good spy and I could make him around the same age, which worked well.
I'm a little description-obsessed at the moment, so a lot of my longer stuff tends to have hordes of description, lol. Aww, thanks!
I actually have no idea if my plot really fits perfectly into canon, but I didn't bother so much with that given that we actually don't know that much about the first war, apart from some snippets Moody tells Harry.

Aww, thanks! *hugs*
Aph xx

p.s. so do I! :P


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