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Review:hushpuppy says:
Wow, an update to this story was a bit of a shock after, I think, a month of silence. I'm glad that you've returned to the story for at least a short time. [I do adore your other story as well though]

Some of the tension has gone out of the story a bit since James and Tabby are together but I'm not sure whether it's due to your writer's block or a it's just a function of losing the UST. I do know that there is enough conflict in other areas of the story to satisfy the reader once the plot advances. We still need information on who killed her mother and who , at school, tried to kill Tabby. I know you'll get over the block, especially if you have the story outlined already.

Have a merry Christmas and good luck with the stories!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I feel bad leaving such long gaps with this story but my mind just hasn't been in the right headspace for this or something. I think when there was all that unresolved romantic tension the story seemed to write itself a bit more and even though I have the storyline mapped out, it's still a bit of a road block. I'll keep working on it and hopefully something will soon come of it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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