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Review:pacific wizard says:
Eldy: Just amazing! Again the dialogue was perfection and the humor had your patented style. Love the way you're weaving through this plot line. It's contains so many possibilities for variation that when the final duels do result, I'm sure the story will have outstanding twists and a thrilling climax.

Here are my thoughts: Yaxley knows that his Voldy wand will lock up with Harry's so he must be on the same quest to figure out a solution. A second identical wand is brilliant but what if Yaxley decided to do what his master did and created a Horcrux as a safety net in case Harry came up with a brilliant ploy to defeat him? Which he must consider that Harry will find a solution. Even if Harry did defeat his wand, Yaxley would survive to strike back or escape. Do I make any sense? This outcome could take Harry by surprise, don't you think? Harry is intent on defeating the wand not necessarily the opponent at this point. Maybe Yaxley is luring Harry into thinking that if can break the lock he has Yaxley when in essence he does not. Just a thought. As always, Well Done you magnificent pagan god! PW

Author's Response: Thanks again! Flattered by all the praise.

Your points on Yaxley's strategizing make infinite sense, but keep in mind, this tale's a prequel to Children's Crusade. The big duel between Yaxley and Harry had already been written (Chapter 3 of Children't Crusade - the Battle of Diagon Alley). Just the same, these are all really excellent ideas.

Cheers!

Eldy

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