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Review:Secret Santa says:
...and that would be the second puddle that I have become today. God, you're so good at just general fluff and romance and cuteness, you know that? You don't beat around the bush, you just get right down to it and I absolutely adore it. Me being a puddle shows that I absolutely LOVE it.

I have read proposal stories before but this has to be one of the best because it's so real. Like, it doesn't have the twenty thousand word speech that has their entire story in it and it doesn't have them on the top of the Eiffel Tower or anything, it's just them. It's Teddy and Victoire and them and how they like things and that's how it should be. No fuss, no drama, just them. Their love. And that's what I loved about this.

I tend to cringe during really fluffy stories. I still adore them, but I still cringe. I didn't cringe once during this.

I thought it was so sweet how excited Teddy was and how carefully he planned it. Every single detail. And what is amazing was that it wasn't boring. I was reading it and I was honestly shocked when I found myself reading the proposal and then it finished because this had my entire attention.

Victoire and Teddy are so comfortable with each other. You really get that sense in this. And because of the, the reader is comfortable.

Now if you'll excuse me, I feel like I need to go hug something and sigh and be all fangirly. Hee.

Author's Response: Oh, yay! I was pretty pleased with the way this turned out, I admit (I know, you're shocked - I was actually happy with something I wrote :P). I'm really glad you liked the way I had him propose, because I dwelled and dwelled and dwelled on it. :P I'm also really glad that you didn't find it boring, because I know that it was long and that there was a lot of description.

Thank you!


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