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Review:Secret Santa says:
*picks self up from floor where I have suddenly become a puddle*

This made me melt. As in, actually melt. And not because it's so stinking hot. This was just so goddamn sweet. I wanted to get a pillow and bite into it because I couldn't handle how insanely adorable it was.

You make things so relatable, you know? When I read your stories, I kind of forget that I am reading fanfiction. I just sit back and enjoy what I'm reading and don't give it any more thought than that. It's so hard to do but you do it. You take me to the place that most authors try to do in fanfiction but there is always this block or uneasiness because I know that I am reading fanfiction. That doesn't happen with yours. Your characters are real and easy to relate to and I adore them.

I loved Victoire and Dominique's relationship in this. It's nice that they have a good relationship, for once. Until now, all the things I have read with them have always had them have a strained relationship. Maybe it's because Dominique hasn't hit her later teenager years in this, but it's just nice that they are sisters who are nice to each other. It's refreshing to read that.

And then, of course, the date. Could they GET any cuter? Teddy was so adorable in this. It was just so obvious how much he wanted Victoire as much as she wanted him and it was just... gah, so insanely and ridiculously cute. I swear, I just want to squish both their cheeks or something. But I won't. Because that would be weird.

I'm kind of sad that this ended, to be honest. I could easily have gone on reading this forever and that is testament to you!


Author's Response: You make me feel so awesome as a writer. I don't know if you're just being extra nice because it's secret santas or not, but either way, you keep paying me these huge compliments and making me smile a lot! :)

I'm glad you liked Victoire and Dominique's relationship in this! I get so tired of the overdone Dominique-middle-child-jealousy-syndrome. It works sometimes, but nobody ever seems to want to write about them getting along fairly well, which annoys me. They certainly occasionally fight, because who doesn't, but this is basically their relationship throughout everything I've been working on.

I'm sorry you're sad, but on the other hand, I'm also kind of happy. :P And on the bright side, you've obviously found my prequel/sequels! :)

Thank you so, so much! ♥

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