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Review:Secret Santa says:
Hello, hello! I am sorry that I have been sporadic with my reviews but I'm back again! :D

This made me smile. I haven't read that many Teddy/Victoire stories. All the Next Gen that I tend to read just has them lingering in the background somewhere. And they're never done that well. Teddy is a bit too perfect and Victoire is either perfect or a spoilt princess.

This is nice because you give them characters, you know? Victoire is just another teenage girl with a crush on Teddy and Teddy is another teenage boy with a crush on Victoire. Ha. It's so true, though! They like each other. I can see it. Teehee.

I'm surprised that you made Fred so old in this. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice change! Normally, he is around the age of James or Dominique so it's nice that he's a bit older in this because he and Victoire work really well together. I can really tell that they're good friends on top of being cousins.

I'm excited to read on in this! I have always wanted to read a Teddy/Victoire and it's nice that I am finally getting around to it, and with such a good one, too!

Author's Response: You're actually apologizing?? Don't be ridiculous! We all have lives, especially at this time of year. You are the best SS ever. ♥

And yes! That is exactly what always irritates me about reading Teddy/Victoire! Victoire in particular. As you have definitely gathered, my Vic is neither perfect nor a spoiled princess nor even a blonde ice queen, and I like her that way. (Obviously. :P)

And yeah, I know that Fred is usually about James's age - I actually never like that because I thought that the idea that somehow everyone would have kids at exactly the same time was a bit strange. I have Victoire as leaving Hogwarts in 2018, Fred in 2019, Molly in 2020, Dominique in 2021, Louis and Lucy in 2022, James and Roxanne in 2023, Albus and Rose in 2024, and Lily and Hugo in 2026. (Just in case you were curious... I probably just bored you horribly, though. :( Sorry.)

I'm so glad you like this one. :)


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