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Review:forsakenphoenix says:
Percy trying to bake a cake! That was so cute (okay, I'm seriously getting tired of writing cute but I know of no other word to describe your story! It's cute and fluffy like...little marshmallow people). I love your descriptions of picking cornflakes out of the bowl, scooping out the flour and sugar, and his mishap with cracking the egg. It's adorable how hard he's trying to bake this cake for Molly and he thinks it's easy from what he's seen, but you know, minor detail of his mum having a wand and all.

I love Ginny's inclusion in this chapter and how outraged she is to not be involved in anything related to the preparations. It's amusing how she keeps trying to tell them Molly is back but being the youngest, and the only girl, I imagine it's rather difficult to get your older brothers to listen to you.

The idea of the clock having a broken piece on it because Ron broke it off is nice, and the fact that Mrs Weasley didn't fix it. It makes it perfectly imperfect for the Weasley family and it's a clever way to incorporate an object that we know is canon and explain how it came to be. :)

As usual, your writing is flawless and your characterizations of the Weasleys is enviable. Love it!

Author's Response: Little marshmallow people -- that made me giggle so much. :D Now I'm imagining little Weasleys running around all looking like the Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man from 'Ghostbusters', and let me tell you, at midnight that is a humorous thing indeed. :3

Ginny, as you know, is not one of my favorite characters ever, but for some reason she's not too bad if you're writing her as a little girl. :P She gets to be all feisty without all those obnoxious teenage problems! I love that clock, too; if I could get a replica, I so would!

Aaagh, thank you SO much. Seriously, I am just... I am blown away. ♥ I cannot express my appreciation for all these reviews!!

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