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Review:Santa, of the secret sort says:
Hello :)

I love the fluff. It's calming, relaxing...definitely how I imagine Victorie and Teddy's relationship. It seems so easy...so light and airy. So natural. And before I go any further, I'm gonna nitpick on one thing:

"Her aunt is welcomes them into the family home with a smile and cries of “ma chérie!”, taking their bags to their rooms as they retire to the parlour." -you don't want the is in there. Other than this small thing, grammar was good and there were no other errors.

My favorite part of this story has to be the teasing between Teddy and Victorie, the banter of 'quit staring at me.' It made me laugh a little bit because it definitely made them seem younger, as if they were kids, not the young adults who had only a few days before returning to the real world. I also love the description of the house and sun setting. It was so creative and just...it was amazing! You did really well with the fluff writing!

~Santa

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