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Review:My name is Santa....SECRET Santa. says:
Hello again! :)

I have returned for another round of reviews on this very merry Chrsitmas eve (I'm only 3 hours off of Christmas eve xD).

So. This story was Beautiful! It may not help that I am a sucker for Tonks/Remus stories (they are my favorite pairing), but I did not see any grammatical errors, or errors of any kind. I did see a lot of imagery and the flow of one sentence to the next was mesmerizing to the point where I got lost within the words. The small pieces of each of the characters was amazing too. Tonks held her clumsy edge, and there was a little bit of a different side of Remus, one I haven't seen written into his character. And that would be his sort of carefree way of holding himself, of him enjoying the time he has with Tonks. Most Tonks/Remus I have read contain Remus being really...withdrawn, I guess. So that bit of characterization was really refreshing.

I also stand in amazement. 500 words even? I'm not sure I could ever manage that in the delicate way you have. It's amazing. You really made a strong standing story in so few words! So, before I go, I will share my favorite part:

"Wrapping themselves in each other, they were shielded from tomorrow’s perils. Their fierce optimism protected them from despair, their despair inviting realism, a battle of keeping their heads and minds above the surface of misery."

These two sentences...I don't know why, but they sort of stuck to me. The made me smile, just a little bit.

Beautiful overall!
~Secret Santa :D

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