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Review:Fleur Delacour says:
Have a holly jolly Christmas... ♥

Lucy's characterization just gets better and better with each successive chapter, and it's just so much fun to read about her! All of her little bouts of internal monologues and descriptions and dramatic flair really make me want to get to know her better. And that's really something that's admirable, because for some reason, a lot of people write next generation characters off to be completely rude on purpose. Which just doesn't make sense to me. BUT THE POINT IS. I think you've got Lucy characterized here extremely well!

I sense there might be a bit of something eventual between her and Lysander, and I do hope I'm right, because I think that would be adorable as all get-out. :D They are so the unlikely couple with their names written in the stars, and now I am totally shipping them. They can, I don't know -- bond over a dragon, or something.

This review is probably of no help to you, because in looking back over it I realize it's sort of a ramble. Honestly, this was a fantastic first three chapters, and I really hope you'll update soon so I can leave you a (proper) review! But no matter what you write, fluff or otherwise, you're very talented, and you can pull it off so well. :)

Have a lovely holiday, and eats lots of delicious food, of course! ♥ Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Thank you! Lucy's one of the easiest characters to write for me, and I think I'm pretty happy with her all around, so I'm glad you think that. :)

heh ♥ Maybe they will ;) You'll just have to wait and see!

Your review was lovely! (also, I found it funny how the next chapter was validated right after this, heh) Thank you so much and I hope your Christmas was lovely!

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