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Review:CambAngst says:
What a fantastic ending. I have thoroughly enjoyed following this story, rough spots and all. The loss of Fred was, I think, hard on a lot of the readers of the HP novels. Your story brings a nice form of closure to Fred's tragic death.

I didn't see any typos or continuity issues with this chapter. Everything about it was terrific. If I was going to critique you on anything, it would be the fact that I would have enjoyed seeing more of the Weasley clan included at some point. But face it, that's just personal preference. The way you kept things spartan really helped to maintain a tight focus on George, Arthur and Molly and their recovery.

Congratulations on completing your story! I'll keep an eye out for what comes next.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the ending. It was my plan from the beginning to end the story with the birth of Fred- a full circle, in a sense- and I'm glad that others feel that it was a good end.

I've really appreciated all your advice and comments in your reviews. I definitely agree that Fred's death was hard on many readers and I'm glad that you think my story brought out some sort of closure, since this story was about the Weasley family's healing journey after his death.

Thanks once again for reviewing all the way through- I really appreciate it!

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