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Review:And all through the house says:
Merry christmas (again)

I liked the introduction to the cast in this chapter. Jane and Franny. It's good that Minerva has a solid basis of friendship. She seemed so generally down in the dumps over the summer. I can relate though... the overly stuffy parents who forget what it's like to be youthful and full of vitality. I really like that there hadn't been any girls on the Quidditch team before. I have a sneaking hunch that Minerva's the first?? The replay of the scene when Harry catches the snitch and is put on the team by Minerva only with Minerva and Dumbledore was precious. Loved it.

And the chamber. gahhh. Omg.

Quickly scampering off to chapter three!
Merry christmas
xx
Your secret santa

Author's Response: I had real troubles with this chapter because I didn't want to go through the whole September 1st ritual and have it be really boring, but it felt neccesary at the same time. so in the end it crept there.

I couldn't resist that! I could just imagine when Minnie saw Harry make the catch that she must have been thinking of a time when that was HER and then... yup, just couldn't resit.

Thank you so much! :)

-AC


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