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Review:pacific wizard says:
Eldy: So good! You have such a way with narrating battle scenes and again the dialogue between Ron and Harry is funny but keeps the intensity of their plight riveting. Awesome job! Seamus's tongue in cheek comments were hilarious. Loving every minute of this story. Very well done. PW

Author's Response: Thanks again!

I got myself in a bit of a pickle with this story. I violated my cardinal rule: never start posting till the story is done. I wrote chapter 1 and posted before I'd written anything else. It was really difficult to make the segment of the battle in chapter 1 jive with the full scene in Chapter 3. I'm glad you think it worked.

Ron and Harry's dialogue was a real blast to write. Their back-and-forth after McG tells them to be careful in the last chapter, the whole bit with Seamus trying to apparate away and especially the jibes R/H trade during the fight were all great fun.

It really is a joy getting these great reviews from you.

Eldy

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