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Review:gingersnape says:
OMG AMEZ

This just... wow. I loved how the whole thing built up the the thought process that Petunia was going through. You captured so many emotions with the little snapshot in time and I did not expect the bit at the end, though when I read it, I was just sat there in thought for a good few minutes afterward.

The balence between Lily and Petunia's relationship is also really well done, as they are close but still have the snags and sisterly fights. The whole piece walks the line between playful teasing and aggression fantastically and your Lily was amazingly written. (Not that you've written about Lily before... or that I'd looove an update with her... nope, not at all)

Steph did a great job, so I can't think of anything to point out, Julia's banner is SO PRETTY, and the whole story was great! HAPPEH CHRISTMAS AMEZ!! And I'm looking forward to that other one-shot! ;) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h)

Keep up the awesome and general world suck decreasery via amazing writing! :D

Annie

Author's Response: OMG ANNIEZ!

Wow, it really made you think? I am glad! I never thought I could pull that one off, but apparently I did :D

You will get an update on that one...one day! I promise! It's on the top of my list after my exams! I will do it! And I always thought that Lily and Petunia would have just been normal sisters. They have to have been. Everything horrible between them was because of the jealousy of Lily being a witch, so before that, when this is set, would have just been them being normal sisters :D

:O Nothing wrong with it? *dies* THANK YOU! And it is a VERY pretty banner! :D HAPPY CHRISTMAS ANIEZ! The short story, you mean? It will be on its way next year! (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h) (h)

:O *dies again* I decreased world suck with this? :O


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