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Review:EverDiggory says:
you did do James and Lily justice(:
I did enjoy this,despite my distaste for James/Lily...
Strong points were definitely James dislike towards Severus and his concern for Lily.

I think details could have been added to this one,unless it was supposed to be that James was so lost in his thoughts. I think there could have been a bit more on the setting as well.

This was pretty good,which is definitely something to be proud of(: Im sure this story was enjoyed and appreciated by the lot! 8/10

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear that. I'm sorry that you didn't think I added enough details, as I really tried to describe the dinner table and the house adequately. It was written in such a way that James was kind of supposed to be lost in his thoughts, though, rather than focusing on the present.

Thanks for your kind review :)

academica


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