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Review:sophie_hatter says:
Ah! I do love a party! Luna's party for Lily was a treat. Very Luna, and a lot of fun. Not sure I like her being 'Aunt' Luna though:-). I thought there was some very nice touches: Ron and Hermione's very in-character interchange on the subject of Barnaby, and James's dreadful girlfriend were fab. The twins were really cute. I loved their relationship, and their big plans.

I thought you dropped two really good bombshells in the chapter, in Scorpius's arrest and Lily's location of Snape. I really like the explanation of the watch as a compass, although I hope you explain how this works further down the line!

If I had one small criticism to offer, I did feel that perhaps Ginny came across as a tiny bit harsh during the confrontation with her daughter. But only a tiny bit!

One small typo that I spotted: 'The reaming adults had moved into the back garden' should be 'the *remaining* adults'

Author's Response: Well, I finally finished cleaning up the chapters (I hope) and once again, thank you for your reviews along the way. The were very helpful. I took your note about the "aunt luna" bit and removed the reference. There are actually plenty of real aunts and uncles in the chapter now that I take another look at it. There is a lot more information down the road about the watch and why it does what it does, but I'm glad you liked its inclusion thus far. As to Ginny's attitude, I agree she was out of line. Though like the watch, I do have bigger plans for her, which will explain her attitude. Hopefully, in the mean time, she comes off as more of an overbearing mother than actually out of character.

Thanks again for all your reviews. I haven't forgotten about your story either and will be returning the favor and hopefully updating this story soon!

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