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Review:sophie_hatter says:
Hello! I'm back as promised, sorry for the break in transmission.

This is another great chapter. The interaction between Lily and Al that opens the chapter plays out very well., and I absolutely loved the description of Scorpius's letter, including the magic that guided Lily to him. It was beautifully described.

I also enjoyed Scorpius and Lily in this chapter. The layers of complexity you've given their relationship are slowly being peeled back, and the spikiness between them that can't quite hide their affection is excellent. Lily's uncertainty about him, and about her own feelings also comes through well.

All in all, I really enjoyed reading this. I just picked up one little typo: 'which was a lot more complicated than Lily would of thought' should be '...than Lily would *have* thought.'

Author's Response: First off, sorry for taking so long to reply. I've been neglecting my account page a bit over the past few weeks. Second, thanks for pointing out the typo. I've gone ahead and fixed it. That all said, thank you for another thoughtful review. I'm so glad you liked the bit with the letter. I went back and forth on it for a long time. I'm also glad to hear their relationship is unfolding well. It's meant to be layered (with their checkered past) but also at the same time, it's just two teenagers who really like each other.

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